If You Say So (verse)

just a verse for (maybe) a future song...

verse: introspect (me)
beat/chorus: dj corbett

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LINKS:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...120/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...125/index.html

Sup man, just peepin your track here, the beat is real nice! Im diggin the chorus, its real tight. verse comes in on point, flow is tight, quality is nice. you got a nice presence here, it fits the beat real well. it was mixed pretty well, and it meshed with the beat nice. you delivered it tight too. overall nothin bad to say, Id love to hear the full track man. and YESSS my mixtape is comin soon, just waitin on the cover art an shit. so stay tuneeed!

-Peace

nice fuckin production man, pro soundin shit.... not my style, and not something i would listen to , but sounds very good dude.... like somethin youd hear on the radio, so good job man

damn the beat and hook are crazy i really love em, not feeling the way u came on but as the verse went on i started to like it more, the flow is wat caught me off guard, im not too crazy about ti but it does ride proper, good mixing here also

overall nice job not exactly my type but deff pretty nice

pls rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...034/index.html

you killed this shit homie..

you are a really good rapper? how did you do this?

i will pay you if you could teach me.

^ hahaha

thanks guys

the beat is hard...chorus is catchy...not bad a track right here...need a bit of polishing but like you said its a rough version

Chorus is dope. Were you ever named intention? Sounds like a dude i used to listen to. quality is good. creative lyrics....i really felt the imagery. Delivery was on point. Nothing negative to say except maybe you should make this into a whole song, it was pretty dope and i was mad that it was so short

thank you