10. 24 Hours, good luck.
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10. 24 Hours, good luck.
Twat.
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Last time You won by default... Therefore kill yourself.
That shit your writing is garbage, but I ain't mad at dawg,
Has more petty flips then when moms read Macy's catalogues,
Dismember your whole style, you are pursuing with a lord,
I catch heads..like what Isis members do when their bored,
Me & your hoe get freaky, usually when she's sick drunk,
Looked like the titanic, one slap on the side & her tits sunk,
Him writing is beyond hilarious, so no ones proud of you,
I'd give son a helping hand... But I'd rather beat the bitch out of u,
Claims he's a star, trust me, fags gonna get dropped,
Arose to fame March of 2013... sent his first friend request on Xbox
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Aka Johnny blaze..
JB date raping bitches since his is plastic bro
Lenscraft is an eye soar that could rival Galactics nose
Your girl walking funny & its not shitty under pants
Now your girls vag is toulouse as cities in france
In 3-word cyphers joining forces with nonsensical groups
So I'll smack lentil fanboy resembles a vegetable in soup
Cries about gay injustices & school lunch, compelled by drama
When teen packs a fruit punch... Don't blame it on Michelle Obama
With no real reliable ghost-writer look at what fool does
You'll finally be johnny on the spot... laying in a pool of blood
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Lenox
That shit your writing is garbage, but I ain't mad at dawg,
Has more petty flips then when moms read Macy's catalogues,
See what you were shooting for but could of been worded better
Dismember your whole style, you are pursuing with a lord,
I catch heads..like what Isis members do when their bored,
Simple concept alot of potential in your bars tho
Me & your hoe get freaky, usually when she's sick drunk,
Looked like the titanic, one slap on the side & her tits sunk,
not really feeling the gf sex thing
Him writing is beyond hilarious, so no ones proud of you,
I'd give son a helping hand... But I'd rather beat the bitch out of u,
miss my man
Claims he's a star, trust me, fags gonna get dropped,
Arose to fame March of 2013... sent his first friend request on Xbox
not feeling bro
feedback: alot of potential in your bars but your punches need some tweeking to hit harder and the selfglory bars really didnt hit hard
JB date raping bitches since his is plastic bro
Lenscraft is an eye soar that could rival Galactics nose
Opener seens off but eyesoar/Huge i understand it
Your girl walking funny & its not shitty under pants
Now your girls vag is toulouse as cities in france
Simple but like the concept
In 3-word cyphers joining forces with nonsensical groups
So I'll smack lentil fanboy resembles a vegetable in soup
miss my man seen better from u
Cries about gay injustices & school lunch, compelled by drama
When teen packs a fruit punch... Don't blame it on Michelle Obama
not really feeling punch set up is there
With no real reliable ghost-writer look at what fool does
You'll finally be johnny on the spot... laying in a pool of blood
I get it Johny on the Spot is a portypotty you shit on em/ kill me Cool Nameplay
Feedback: some of your wording was off and there were some misses but the Toulouse and Johny on the spot were the hardest bars and concepts of the battle.. shows alot of potential just need more consistency like your wordplay n nameplay bars
V/Lenox decent battle guys both show alot of potential
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that vote was for e the real my bad
Asshole
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Lenox didnt have anything that stood out and he had a bunch of misses and played concepts. Titanic punches are ancient its near impossible to do a fresh flip on it, the isis punch wasn't a diss more like just giving yourself props ineffective in a text battle. And the other three bars i just wasnt feeling to be honest. e thought the lentil punch was pretty clever and nice and the rest of your verse was just average. Nothing really caught my eye in this battle, thought the lentil punch was enough to secure the win. v~> E Tha areal
Well Lenox wasn't feeling this. I honestly
Thought ur opener was trash. U had a couple cool concepts that needs to be worded a bit harsher.
E - ur verse was decent. Ur opener was cool. Toulouse was bland and lentils been done before. I liked Johnny on the spot
Overall E had better plays here and wording was better but had a couple played bars. Lenox elevation is crazy tbh but this verse didn't cut it tbh. E had a few better bars and Lenox had misses.
Vote E
Lenox:
Nothing stood out in your verse as quote worthy. But a lot of potential.
E:
Toulouse was slick, and ur opener was good.
Vote e in a one sided battle
Nothing
Vs.
Toulouse, lentil
Good battle, Lenox just had a few issues wording, v/E Tha real
That shit your writing is garbage, but I ain't mad at dawg,
Has more petty flips then when moms read Macy's catalogues,
i see where this battle is going already, so ill critique based on yous guys' talent here....i see the concept here but the punch wasnt packin
Dismember your whole style, you are pursuing with a lord,
I catch heads..like what Isis members do when their bored,
nah man, concept not bad but wasnt used good here
Me & your hoe get freaky, usually when she's sick drunk,
Looked like the titanic, one slap on the side & her tits sunk,
lol simple but made me laugh
Him writing is beyond hilarious, so no ones proud of you,
I'd give son a helping hand... But I'd rather beat the bitch out of u,
meh
Claims he's a star, trust me, fags gonna get dropped,
Arose to fame March of 2013... sent his first friend request on Xbox
nah weakness
vs
JB date raping bitches since his is plastic bro
Lenscraft is an eye soar that could rival Galactics nose
im sensing wordplay here, just not adding up for me tho sorry lol
Your girl walking funny & its not shitty under pants
Now your girls vag is toulouse as cities in france
cool wordplay but weak punch, could have been better
In 3-word cyphers joining forces with nonsensical groups
So I'll smack lentil fanboy resembles a vegetable in soup
cool nameplay, simplish but good
Cries about gay injustices & school lunch, compelled by drama
When teen packs a fruit punch... Don't blame it on Michelle Obama
ok
With no real reliable ghost-writer look at what fool does
You'll finally be johnny on the spot... laying in a pool of blood
nah not feelin
This was a similar base of talent here, both had similar quality bars, but what is deciding the winner here is concepts and usage of nameplay/wordplay, based on that im giving this to E...honestly no hate, im just trying to get a link...most battles open are of the same people, i understand if you want this DQed but for now Vote: E
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Ko e tha real