10 Lines
due tomorrow midnight pacific time.
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10 Lines
due tomorrow midnight pacific time.
Check... I wrote like 8 of the lines for prep.. Freestyled the other 2 lines for a name play..
Good luck son
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Fucking u up lyrically wise cuz it's pretty easy, u ain't even dig crates,
Spitta few, & listen to cartunes while I get more recognition then his mixtape,
I'll drown your worthless fucking soul, bitch don't doubt shit,
If body hits water ya won't float on, but least I'm being modest about it,
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
He don't want none with me, take a battle? Im the worst thing,
No fan but yoll see his balls drop quicker than an Akron 3rd string,
I'm Known to stir up mad fucking trouble, kid just face it,
when setting bar to this lower level, it's to show u that I'm hips replacement
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Coming in with pre-written bars was corny fam
But in reality all it did was assure me the win before the battle even began
I get top notch women, while Lenox can't even get a chick that is wack
When it comes to pussy, I get my pick of the litter while ur at home feeding ur cats
Saw what you said about bar in the mag LOL you're a fool,b
What you said in the interview was so gay it rivaled eminems in that movie
You had potential, but now you'll get KO'ed cuz all that talk is past tense
So it won't be a practical joke when I give you a black eye lens
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke
@Lenox lets get those linkns in so we can open this for votes
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
decent punch, set up couldve been better overall good humor
vs
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke
nice wordplay,flowed nice and hit
v.hipster/less misses than len, concepts connected better.
Lenox
Fucking u up lyrically wise cuz it's pretty easy, u ain't even dig crates,
Spitta few, & listen to cartunes while I get more recognition then his mixtape,
more of a self hype bar
I'll drown your worthless fucking soul, bitch don't doubt shit,
If body hits water ya won't float on, but least I'm being modest about it,
ill drown ur fucking soul youll bitch as I soak ur outfit
once ya body hits water it wont float on,at least im being modest about it
I like the flip and the idea it was a direct punch creative but the setup seemed to basic for the finisher as well as the rhyme scheme didn't really click for me.
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
lmao nice flip
He don't want none with me, take a battle? Im the worst thing,
No fan but yoll see his balls drop quicker than an Akron 3rd string,
had to google this tbh im not sure if u displayed it right the info I got was a new years reference u came off as a football reference
I don't watch college ball like that but I guess it was a good concept
I'm Known to stir up mad fucking trouble, kid just face it,
when setting bar to this lower level, it's to show u that I'm hips replacement
nameplay was ok I felt u could've done more to the finisher
Hipster
Coming in with pre-written bars was corny fam
But in reality all it did was assure me the win before the battle even began
not hard hitting too basic of a punchline
I get top notch women, while Lenox can't even get a chick that is wack
When it comes to pussy, I get my pick of the litter while ur at home feeding ur cats
lol cool flip
Saw what you said about bar in the mag LOL you're a fool,b
What you said in the interview was so gay it rivaled eminems in that movie
lmfao nice concept
You had potential, but now you'll get KO'ed cuz all that talk is past tense
So it won't be a practical joke when I give you a black eye lens
cool nameplay direct punch
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke
lol
Lenox some better concepts but again the execution and wording my man ur 2nd bar had madd potential just like I said the setup could've been better still was a decent hit though. speed bumps was funny though it had humor factor the setup and finisher went perfectly together that was one of ur better bars. 3rd string Akron bar was cool but I don't think a lot of heads would get it unless they research it. closer also had potential but finisher needed to be displayed better setting bar to lower level and hips replacement just didn't go together for me. Hipster opener was basic. 2nd bar was a cool flip. your nameplays were creative. The interview bar was funny and had good humor factor.
V/Hipster reason being I felt his concepts were more wittier and he displayed better wording and creativity as well as humor factor
Fucking u up lyrically wise cuz it's pretty easy, u ain't even dig crates,
Spitta few, & listen to cartunes while I get more recognition then his mixtape,
nah miss
I'll drown your worthless fucking soul, bitch don't doubt shit,
If body hits water ya won't float on, but least I'm being modest about it,
not feelin this either
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
this was dope
He don't want none with me, take a battle? Im the worst thing,
No fan but yoll see his balls drop quicker than an Akron 3rd string,
meh, ok ill give it to you
I'm Known to stir up mad fucking trouble, kid just face it,
when setting bar to this lower level, it's to show u that I'm hips replacement
damn you could have made the hip replacement so dope, wasnt feeling this
vs
Coming in with pre-written bars was corny fam
But in reality all it did was assure me the win before the battle even began
no
I get top notch women, while Lenox can't even get a chick that is wack
When it comes to pussy, I get my pick of the litter while ur at home feeding ur cats
pick of the litter concept played, meh flip tho
Saw what you said about bar in the mag LOL you're a fool,b
What you said in the interview was so gay it rivaled eminems in that movie
wasnt feelin
You had potential, but now you'll get KO'ed cuz all that talk is past tense
So it won't be a practical joke when I give you a black eye lens
pretty good here, could have tied in better but not bad
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke
wording fucked, decent concept, new wordplay on him. decent here
This was a very close battle, I liked Lenox's speed bump line a lot but thats all he had going for him, against Hips few decent lines....so based on consistency im giving this to Hip, just by a hair, and I was rootin for Len after that one bar. Nigga sig that shit.
Vote: Hip
Float on, speed bumps
Vs
Interview,black eye,ellen
So not a good battle IMO. I had Lenox taking this at first. 3rd string could have been dope. And hipsters opener was weak. His verse started cold then picked up. Lenox had lotb but his misses were real soft. Lenox. This was close for me man. I like your wording and concepts. That modest bar was nice imo cos I
Love that band. But hip came with the more aggressive approach and harder hits.
Hip gets my vote by one quote. Could go either way really
4-0. Bump
Fucking u up lyrically wise cuz it's pretty easy, u ain't even dig crates,
Spitta few, & listen to cartunes while I get more recognition then his mixtape,
eh, not hitting hard for me.
I'll drown your worthless fucking soul, bitch don't doubt shit,
If body hits water ya won't float on, but least I'm being modest about it,
doesnt really make sense to me haha. also not really seeing a punchline.
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
not too damaging but thus far seems to be the slightly more direct bar. ok.
He don't want none with me, take a battle? Im the worst thing,
No fan but yoll see his balls drop quicker than an Akron 3rd string,
i have no idea what akron is..
I'm Known to stir up mad fucking trouble, kid just face it,
when setting bar to this lower level, it's to show u that I'm hips replacement
alright this is another bar thats okay but diesnt sting. least it was directed more at the opponent.
Coming in with pre-written bars was corny fam
But in reality all it did was assure me the win before the battle even began
not really a punch. more like a statement. Also if could be taken as feeding, but i dont know the stance on that so yeah.
I get top notch women, while Lenox can't even get a chick that is wack
When it comes to pussy, I get my pick of the litter while ur at home feeding ur cats
ok lol. nothing too hard, you get more girls than him. ooh. but so far a more direct approach than lenox.
Saw what you said about bar in the mag LOL you're a fool,b
What you said in the interview was so gay it rivaled eminems in that movie
I have no idea what eminem or lenox said haha so yeah, a bit vague. but could be an ok hit...
You had potential, but now you'll get KO'ed cuz all that talk is past tense
So it won't be a practical joke when I give you a black eye lens
setup didnt do it for me but the concept was alright.
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke[/QUOTE]
ellen k ha
your verse was overall more direct with slightly better punches.
Vhipster
@Fresh 5-0
Lenox
Fucking u up lyrically wise cuz it's pretty easy, u ain't even dig crates,
Spitta few, & listen to cartunes while I get more recognition then his mixtape,
Not really a diss, so a miss here
I'll drown your worthless fucking soul, bitch don't doubt shit,
If body hits water ya won't float on, but least I'm being modest about it,
Weak, jab at most
Ya girl be spillin shit on my seat, run her over, roads is where I leave cunts,
Bitch is on my mind lately, think of slut every time I hit speed bumps,
Not really directed at him, cool tho
He don't want none with me, take a battle? Im the worst thing,
No fan but yoll see his balls drop quicker than an Akron 3rd string,
Meh miss here
I'm Known to stir up mad fucking trouble, kid just face it,
when setting bar to this lower level, it's to show u that I'm hips replacement
Shits weird to me, np didn't do nothing for ya
Lenox dude not the most harshest verse from ur half really lacking any treat, creativity n any real punch, ur not consistent and try avoid similes till u can use them efficiently.
Hipster
Coming in with pre-written bars was corny fam
But in reality all it did was assure me the win before the battle even began
A bit wordy and corny tbh
I get top notch women, while Lenox can't even get a chick that is wack
When it comes to pussy, I get my pick of the litter while ur at home feeding ur cats
Lol basic shits but funny
Saw what you said about bar in the mag LOL you're a fool,b
What you said in the interview was so gay it rivaled eminems in that movie
Meh miss
You had potential, but now you'll get KO'ed cuz all that talk is past tense
So it won't be a practical joke when I give you a black eye lens
Nope miss again
I can destroy you, but I'll show some mercy seeing as this ain't a fair fight
So I'll be generous with the L- Len. Since you look exactly like that dyke
Alright flip
Hipster had a better verse a few misses but enough to pull a w from Len
Mvgt
Hipster
Hipster wins 5-0. Closed