week 1: Joe Boston Vs Charles Darwin[Open For Votes]

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1-2 WEEK 1

@Joe Boston
@Charles Darwin


Check-In's Due by Tuesday Sept 20th 11:59PM PST
Bars Due by Wednesday Sept 21st 11:59 PST
VOTING CLOSES SATURDAY MORNING

Check and u better be running this,shit @killin g Spree no 2-1 closing shit

Let me give this bitch a reminder in every hood hes walking vagina
You'll see Charleston licking the barrel of the gun shots make him dance like 1920's Carolina

Boston.. Irish, same thing. U Joes like to drink n fight... no pretenders
Catch you on coffee break, n put a shot to ya mug like those offenders

charleston licking/charles tongue licking is forced to teusday...twos dee nigga. twos dee
also a bit wordy on the punch. concept itself was decent tho
vs
joe/coffee angle is ovedone, as well as the mugshot angle but u atleast had the irish connection in there. overall similar concepts have been done like this numerous times on joe.nothing too creative about this bar to add to the impact that was lost by being a played concept

giving this to Joey Ipswich

Joe got this easily

Charles you don't have to use fonts this isn't topical or 2005, also yours was just too simple and had no sting to it

Joe yours was forced as hell don't get me wrong lol but at least the concept was ok

Vote joe

Vote: Joe

He was more creative, Charles' was more generic
even tho Joey had that lame ass wordplay he TRIED to use, it was more effective than Charles'. charles bar was on some boring, been-done, PLAYED type of shit. dont nobody want to keep reading Coffee concepts on Joe, shit's not refreshing -- no fuckin pun intended you buckethead bitch.

Joe was wayyyy to wordy lacked impact on the punch
Charles was basic but he had better wording which lead to better execution
Vote - Charles

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Joe was wayyyy to wordy lacked impact on the punch
Charles was basic but he had better wording which lead to better execution
Vote - Charles

Both punches were just okay....Darwin coulda had a little more creativity, Joe could've had a better set up
I feel that Darwin's bar was more precise simple and straight hitting, Joes choppy 2nd line through off the power of the bunch for me

MVGT Charles

I don't see a Charles Darwin even battling... It says Authentic. Wtf is really goin on??

Anyways,
I like Authentic's bar better.
I thought they were both basic and lacked complexity but Auths read smoother and seemed to be more thought out.
It was a close call, but I felt Auths bar more.

Bro, I don't like the fact that homie changed his name when my Nigga Joe had a name play on him. Smh. Either way. The punch Charles had was cool but I've seen mug/coffee lines before used on him last season if I'm not mistaken. Vote goes to Boston for a better flip here, more direct and fresher


Vote Joe

joes was forced a lil but I liked that attempt. could of ended better tho. Charles bar was lite but played too.

v. joe

Vote authentic. I felt like Joe's bar was too long, and I didn't feel the name play worked.

Jb- wordin was a bit off and it felt like an awkward punch bro

CHarles/authentic- i kno ppl sayin "played" but i feel u executed well bro

Vote: charles/authentic

v/Joe... just better overall... not much to talk discuss on this one.

6-5 Joes way leaving this open for a min for more votes

hoe Boston wins