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@3viction
@Lenox @Zunto
16..
I’m hopping in this battle too because I signed up, so it’s a 3-way
I don't have a problem with that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Zunto
@3viction check in mf
16 sent
3viction is good to go. He sent 16.
lol dia you fucking retard why would u go 16 nobody’s gonna vote on this shit u fat famrryless fgt
Dia’s been wack forever. All he does is fucking pout,
Never seen dude put his heart or soul in this.. & mentioning him 100 times a day doesn’t count.
His cousin actually hated him, in chat acting as a deceiver,
You should kill urself & be together… but i doubt he likes u in the afterlife either.
Your dad’s got u locked in a barn LOL. that farm is his bro,
doesn’t even let him in the house.. he got those bee stings tryna climb through the window.
The nerve of YOU to critique my life, I can’t believe it,
u dunno wtf I’m monumentally retarded, & living with ur parents ya proudest achievement.
Nobody cares how you write ur lines buddy. Ur such a bum it’s sickening.
& fuck eviction process.... cuz you getting kicked out again is far more interesting.
I’m glad ur moms dead faggot, a quick fuck is what the slut was worth,
So when I talk ‘digging ur mother out’, just know I had to buy a shovel first.
Bet u fuck with kids like a weirdo, can’t stand a grown lady’s vagina,
Went from child porn on hard drives… now he just prefers to data minor.
ur wacker than fuck, all filler with no bite,
16 lines from u? Id rather read another 200 with spit dissing the whole site.
Karmas a bitch, it’ll fuck your whole fam up if you get out of line..
You'll have Soules blood on your hands. I'll have your little sisters on mine.
This battle sulfur outta reach, its my cousin's noose and still aint tied tight.
Game ain't nsync w/ mine, after this boy banned, only one he plays is mister nice guy
You can’t tell what the hell’s fake, so that doctored receipt will be your fail safe.
You beat a man fresh out of jail, he saw u hold more prison purses than his cellmate.
There’s levels to this shit, I’ll knock u down a few if ur trying to step son.
You lost to so many retards, u fucked around an caught an L on every side of the spectrum.
Compared to me he's snake oil, gets reprimanded and we see how quickly the man stops.
Fuck how you plan to roll out, all lenox distributions can be controlled by command prompts.
80+ battles, and you have nothing to show for it, ur skill is very worthless.
you’re so fucking gullabe u feel every verse and thank zelph for his military service.
You toxic/talk sick but the poison when I’m throwing hands, will have ya wasted.
You’ll go “downs” quicker than your alt accounts, after I “smash your face in”.
You hold your zelph friendship to close regards, but that relationship will never last. .
It was just cute asf to see you pussies grooming, the way you pulled shit outta your ass.
Lenox
Opener was cool
After life was ok
Bee sting was a miss
Monumentally retarded missed lol I’m monumentally doesn’t work for me in theory I get it , and if you don’t read it the right way it also sounds like you’re calling yourself monumentally retarded lol cool idea , but it just didn’t work for me , again cool idea like the creativity but to me it was a miss
Eviction process was ok
Diggin ur mom shovel was eh
Data minor was dope could have been worded a bit smoother
Spit was a miss
Vs
Opener was flames
2nd bar was bad lol set up was all over the place , sulfur and so far don’t sound the same either lol boy banned was a cool twist but just all over the place
Purses eh
Spectrum was ok
Lennox distro don’t get the punch
Zunto bar was funny
Toxic was a miss
Gross closer lol
Got this at 5-4 after reading Lenox verse and then Dias opener I thought dia was going to turn it on , but he had some bad misses and I just chalked it up to one more quotable for Len … I think this can go either way though pending on preference
Vote Len
Good battle
Dia’s been wack forever. All he does is fucking pout,
Never seen dude put his heart or soul in this.. & mentioning him 100 times a day doesn’t count.
ok
His cousin actually hated him, in chat acting as a deceiver,
You should kill urself & be together… but i doubt he likes u in the afterlife either.
nah wasn’t feelin, could’ve done more with the angle
Your dad’s got u locked in a barn LOL. that farm is his bro,
doesn’t even let him in the house.. he got those bee stings tryna climb through the window.
lol funny
The nerve of YOU to critique my life, I can’t believe it,
u dunno wtf I’m monumentally retarded, & living with ur parents ya proudest achievement.
this is actually fire. Solid wordplay that is tied in perfectly with proudest achievement. Nice
Nobody cares how you write ur lines buddy. Ur such a bum it’s sickening.
& fuck eviction process.... cuz you getting kicked out again is far more interesting.
alright, I assume eviction concept is played on him - however the flip is ok
I’m glad ur moms dead faggot, a quick fuck is what the slut was worth,
So when I talk ‘digging ur mother out’, just know I had to buy a shovel first.
old concept done pretty effectively with the flip/personal
Bet u fuck with kids like a weirdo, can’t stand a grown lady’s vagina,
Went from child porn on hard drives… now he just prefers to data minor.
I’ll let the slant rhyme slide because I know some people pronounce minor like a retarded 7 year old goyl, but the data wp is too old and played to give any credit to lol
ur wacker than fuck, all filler with no bite,
16 lines from u? Id rather read another 200 with spit dissing the whole site.
gay, I’d rather gouge my eyes out
Vs
Karmas a bitch, it’ll fuck your whole fam up if you get out of line..
You'll have Soules blood on your hands. I'll have your little sisters on mine.
I actually liked the execution on this, solid opener
This battle sulfur outta reach, it’s my cousin's noose and still aint tied tight.
Game ain't nsync w/ mine, after this boy banned, only one he plays is mister nice guy
you can’t just throw in a random word for the sake of wordplay when it has nothing to do with anything you’re talking about lmao foh
You can’t tell what the hell’s fake, so that doctored receipt will be your fail safe.
You beat a man fresh out of jail, he saw u hold more prison purses than his cellmate.
idk what a prison purse is but I’m almost sure that’s not a thing
There’s levels to this shit, I’ll knock u down a few if ur trying to step son.
You lost to so many retards, u fucked around a caught an L on every side of the spectrum.
liked this one, good
Compared to me he's snake oil, gets reprimanded and we see how quickly the man stops.
Fuck how you plan to roll out, all lenox distributions can be controlled by command prompts.
yeah ok there’s just one problem here, we aren’t xenforo computer scientists we don’t know wtf ur talking about
80+ battles, and you have nothing to show for it, ur skill is very worthless.
you’re so fucking gullabe u feel every verse and thank zelph for his military service.
there’s no punch here
You toxic/talk sick but the poison when I’m throwing hands, will have ya wasted.
You’ll go “downs” quicker than your alt accounts, after I “smash your face in”.
gone @ explaining the wp in the bar. Horrible. I hope you crash ur car u loser
You hold your zelph friendship to close regards, but that relationship will never last. .
It was just cute asf to see you pussies grooming, the way you pulled shit outta your ass.
doesn’t make any sense
Hmmm ok sooo we have Linux who dropped a consistently decent verse with a couple highlights and very little lowlights, the bars were worded good enough for the most part, and he had some nice stuff like munumentaruy. Dia had 2 good bars in an entire 16 lines and I’m legit mad I took my time to read that shit. Please don’t go past 10 lines ever again.
Tough call
Vote Lenox obv
Dia’s been wack forever. All he does is fucking pout,
Never seen dude put his heart or soul in this.. & mentioning him 100 times a day doesn’t count.
solid
His cousin actually hated him, in chat acting as a deceiver,
You should kill urself & be together… but i doubt he likes u in the afterlife either.
decent
Your dad’s got u locked in a barn LOL. that farm is his bro,
doesn’t even let him in the house.. he got those bee stings tryna climb through the window.
not a fan
The nerve of YOU to critique my life, I can’t believe it,
u dunno wtf I’m monumentally retarded, & living with ur parents ya proudest achievement.
not a fan
Nobody cares how you write ur lines buddy. Ur such a bum it’s sickening.
& fuck eviction process.... cuz you getting kicked out again is far more interesting.
this is an ok jab
I’m glad ur moms dead faggot, a quick fuck is what the slut was worth,
So when I talk ‘digging ur mother out’, just know I had to buy a shovel first.
thats fucked up
Bet u fuck with kids like a weirdo, can’t stand a grown lady’s vagina,
Went from child porn on hard drives… now he just prefers to data minor.
not a fan
ur wacker than fuck, all filler with no bite,
16 lines from u? Id rather read another 200 with spit dissing the whole site.
statementish
vs
Karmas a bitch, it’ll fuck your whole fam up if you get out of line..
You'll have Soules blood on your hands. I'll have your little sisters on mine.
interesting you both started with a soul punch. this was a solid personal
This battle sulfur outta reach, its my cousin's noose and still aint tied tight.
Game ain't nsync w/ mine, after this boy banned, only one he plays is mister nice guy
nope
You can’t tell what the hell’s fake, so that doctored receipt will be your fail safe.
You beat a man fresh out of jail, he saw u hold more prison purses than his cellmate.
didnt like this
There’s levels to this shit, I’ll knock u down a few if ur trying to step son.
You lost to so many retards, u fucked around an caught an L on every side of the spectrum.
are you calling him a square because the 4 L's make a square? i thought my back to back L's / 180 degrees was better. not a fan of this
Compared to me he's snake oil, gets reprimanded and we see how quickly the man stops.
Fuck how you plan to roll out, all lenox distributions can be controlled by command prompts.
not a fan even with the explanation
80+ battles, and you have nothing to show for it, ur skill is very worthless.
you’re so fucking gullabe u feel every verse and thank zelph for his military service.
ok jab
You toxic/talk sick but the poison when I’m throwing hands, will have ya wasted.
You’ll go “downs” quicker than your alt accounts, after I “smash your face in”.
not a fan lol wtf
You hold your zelph friendship to close regards, but that relationship will never last. .
It was just cute asf to see you pussies grooming, the way you pulled shit outta your ass.
not a fan
Thought lenox started off strong with his first 2 then faltered. Like dia's opener than he faltered.
v/ Lenox
Len- 100x a day was alright, afterlife ok, not to creative but it’s something.. thru the window was a miss.. I see the wordplay here and it works but doesn’t.. because it doing go the other way..it’s still gotta read right.. u called urself retarded lol.. eviction process was ok hit.. digging ya mom was a little fucked up I must say…last two weren’t to good
Over this is probably the worst I seen from u.. wasn’t bad, just wasn’t up to standards
3vic - opened with a soul line also, how weird… this was cool tho good opener, 2nd bar wasn’t good, not sure how the sulfur wordplay tied in but w.e.. this also the second battle I mentioned ur own cousins death like wtf show some respect to ur own fam damn…regardless of all that the bar just wasn’t up to par.. prison purse is a butthole.. so saying he seen him hold more buttholes isn’t that good.. L’s line was an ok jab…plan to roll out line went over my head.. next three were misses for me… wasn’t that good of a verse man..no hate just gotta get more creative with ur punches n think outside the box
Vote Lenox pretty boring read on both sides no hate fellas this just wasn’t it
Dia’s been wack forever. All he does is fucking pout,
Never seen dude put his heart or soul in this.. & mentioning him 100 times a day doesn’t count.
Nice opener. And personal.
His cousin actually hated him, in chat acting as a deceiver,
You should kill urself & be together… but i doubt he likes u in the afterlife either.
Good personal.
Your dad’s got u locked in a barn LOL. that farm is his bro,
doesn’t even let him in the house.. he got those bee stings tryna climb through the window.
Roflz.
The nerve of YOU to critique my life, I can’t believe it,
u dunno wtf I’m monumentally retarded, & living with ur parents ya proudest achievement.
Wasn't feeling this.
Nobody cares how you write ur lines buddy. Ur such a bum it’s sickening.
& fuck eviction process.... cuz you getting kicked out again is far more interesting.
Cool.
I’m glad ur moms dead faggot, a quick fuck is what the slut was worth,
So when I talk ‘digging ur mother out’, just know I had to buy a shovel first.
Lmao. Harsh fucking personal.
Bet u fuck with kids like a weirdo, can’t stand a grown lady’s vagina,
Went from child porn on hard drives… now he just prefers to data minor.
Cool.
ur wacker than fuck, all filler with no bite,
16 lines from u? Id rather read another 200 with spit dissing the whole site.
You know what? It's statementish. But I thought it was dope.
Karmas a bitch, it’ll fuck your whole fam up if you get out of line..
You'll have Soules blood on your hands. I'll have your little sisters on mine.
Cool opener. Easily the best punch I've ever read from you in my life.
This battle sulfur outta reach, its my cousin's noose and still aint tied tight.
Game ain't nsync w/ mine, after this boy banned, only one he plays is mister nice guy
This shit was terrible. Sulfur was a wordplay. 1. Why did you use sulfur as a wordplay in the setup? 2. Why did you use sulfur as a wordplay in that manner? That was awful, bro. And here you go talking shit about your deceased relatives again. Wtf. Then you cap it off with a boy band wordplay and concept that had nothing to do with the setup. Lmfao. I mean you have a little bit of sulfur, a little bit of your dead cousin, and a little bit of boy band all crammed into this one bar with no real purpose whatsoever.
You can’t tell what the hell’s fake, so that doctored receipt will be your fail safe.
You beat a man fresh out of jail, he saw u hold more prison purses than his cellmate.
Not sure what a prison purse is.
There’s levels to this shit, I’ll knock u down a few if ur trying to step son.
You lost to so many retards, u fucked around an caught an L on every side of the spectrum.
Decent.
Compared to me he's snake oil, gets reprimanded and we see how quickly the man stops.
Fuck how you plan to roll out, all lenox distributions can be controlled by command prompts.
I bet you been waiting for a long fucking time to flip Lenox into some computer nerd shit. Lmao.
80+ battles, and you have nothing to show for it, ur skill is very worthless.
you’re so fucking gullabe u feel every verse and thank zelph for his military service.
Dope. (Fix your typos, tho.)
You toxic/talk sick but the poison when I’m throwing hands, will have ya wasted.
You’ll go “downs” quicker than your alt accounts, after I “smash your face in”.
Toxic/Talk Sick is played. Doing an expo at the beginning of your bar is even worse. Then you just fucking butchered your wording. By the time I got to the actual punchline I was super pissed.
You hold your zelph friendship to close regards, but that relationship will never last. .
It was just cute asf to see you pussies grooming, the way you pulled shit outta your ass.
If they are grooming their pussies, wouldn't the shit be coming out of their pussies? I could be wrong on that let me Google it. Okay never googling that shit ever again.
I have Lenox winning 7-3. Best verse I've ever read from 3viction. He lost. But it's apparent that he put a great deal of effort into that verse. Lenox was really brutal here, though.
v-Lenox
len wins by KO