Setting Roots

The beginning of a new crew, through the minds of the chosen few, formed dawned in the open mic forum, warning that ‘Corrupted Visions’ there’s no stopping stalling no falling, im corrupting my own lyrics appalling, multi’s building a frame, chain directed straight from the brain forming a continual link calling out readers ready for explosive flow, believers eager for knowledge to grow, so keep spaces at the top for us me then the ‘afraid not’, sweltering heat cascading ma last drop, co-leading the crew, along with the crew leader me and Masta C gonna make you a believer, adhere to skill thought meaning no deceiver or misdemeanour. Come try out if ya eager, limited places only so many faces places for the new elite fleet, setting the new concrete status……...................like i said only so many spaces!!!

I cant speak for everyone when i say this but, i find it hard as hell to read raps that are written in paragraph form. I read yours and i really liked it, it has good flow, i like how you use rhyming words right next to each other it really ups the calibur.

that was aight give it about a 6 on the lyricall dose scale at first i was reading a bunch of mumble jumble then i seen you're not consitsant with hard hits

what u talkin bout kid, it makes perfect sense, and its not supposed to have consistant hits.............

........more opinions plz!

can i have some decent feedback plz.........
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