Rnd 1 - Fresh (4-1) vs Mal Diction (2-8) Fresh Wins.

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Fresh @mal diction

g'luck ...

Good luck

I demand you quit rapping, I don’t wanna talk to you or anything
We could try to Adjure wins… but it’s only the losses that are listenin’

You’ll see the light. all fax. Off with your head. no cap.
You’ll move double time, or get hit with The Flash… bro stamp

Well, let me first start off with saying you both didn't rhyme and I don't think it's debatable, so that's rather shocking, that being said..

I was feeling freshs wp, kinda random but no complaints, it did enough

I get no joy in voting against mal for the 3rd time in a row or w/e it is cuz I think his stuff more recently has been better but this one unfortunately did miss for me

v/ fresh

I liked the wordplay fresh- havent seen that one yet. I thought the punch could have had a little more impact but the concept was cool enough to not really hurt you in that regard. Mal the flash/gun connection was actually a decent concept but i felt it was delivered awkwardly, it was just a little too choppy and all over the place. My vote goes to Fresh

v.Fresh/just enough to take this one. rhyming was off from both

Wasn't quite sure what Mal Diction was going for here. Mal you gotta eliminate those hundred periods & comas bro. And at the end of the day, what was said I'm the punch just didn't seem to hit too hard. Fresh had the Adjure play and just felt a little more disrespectful with the wins/losses records punch MVGT the Freshman.

Mal, I like the double tap philosophy, but honestly the set up line outshines the end punch, which was underwhelming. Fresh had a cool wp, though I wish the set up tied it in better then "I command you". The creativity and personal elements let him edge this.

Vote - Fresh

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Fresh wins 5-0.