Week 11 - RicanTheoryz (2-3) vs EXalted (0-0) Ex wins by NS

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Knox ville @EXalted

smh. 10

no show

Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.

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Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz

Stop being a girl & drop your verse Faggit.

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You trash bruh, 10 here if he no show


Cardio should be 'gainst the law for this fatty latin retard
We know the real Critical Race Theory. runnin ONE'll land you in the ER
Boy ur weak, watch me take care of this spoiled dweeb
Crybaby loser, i'm Rican Sitter'in this match & why i evn joined the league
Writes likes he's got head trauma; words mad basic & dull
If any concepts are food for thought it's cus on paper- plates in his skull
& ya wife keep 2 hands on my dick/balls when i bust a nut
Ironic she holds the sack & let one slip out: that she's my lil Buttercup
His exes were cat called etc. n fed this incel lies to start shit
Get a handle onhow to Pressure Hoes. they fcked the wholeee Fire Dept

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Exalted.

You trash bruh, 10 here if he no show


Cardio should be 'gainst the law for this fatty latin retard
We know the real Critical Race Theory. runnin ONE'll land you in the ER
This was pretty funny. Nice opener.
Boy ur weak, watch me take care of this spoiled dweeb
Crybaby loser, i'm Rican Sitter'in this match & why i evn joined the league
[B]A tad of a stretch. But executed nicely. I fuck w/ this.
Writes likes he's got head trauma; words mad basic & dull
If any concepts are food for thought it's cus on paper- plates in his skull
This was a solid jab.
& ya wife keep 2 hands on my dick/balls when i bust a nut
Ironic she holds the sack & let one slip out: that she's my lil Buttercup
Kinda light.
His exes were cat called etc. n fed this incel lies to start shit
Get a handle onhow to Pressure Hoes. they fcked the wholeee Fire Dept
[B]Dope concept, just not sold on the execution.

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Overall, strong verse. Started really strong, then kinda faded. But the first 6 lines displayed your understanding of how to formulate a punch. Nice first impression. Welcome to the league.

Cardio should be 'gainst the law for this fatty latin retard
We know the real Critical Race Theory. runnin ONE'll land you in the ER

Boy ur weak, watch me take care of this spoiled dweeb
Crybaby loser, i'm Rican Sitter'in this match & why i evn joined the league


Those two were ya best out the verse Good no show shine faggot

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Originally Posted by Exalted.

You trash bruh, 10 here if he no show


Cardio should be 'gainst the law for this fatty latin retard
We know the real Critical Race Theory. runnin ONE'll land you in the ER
Ha cool
Boy ur weak, watch me take care of this spoiled dweeb
Crybaby loser, i'm Rican Sitter'in this match & why i evn joined the league
Love the nameplay and punch. Think the 'reconsider why I even joined the league' angle needs a bit more context from the set up - "Boy ur weak.. I signed in just to face this spoiled dweeb!?"
Writes likes he's got head trauma; words mad basic & dull
If any concepts are food for thought it's cus on paper- plates in his skull
cool
& ya wife keep 2 hands on my dick/balls when i bust a nut
Ironic she holds the sack & let one slip out: that she's my lil Buttercup
don't get this one
His exes were cat called etc. n fed this incel lies to start shit
Get a handle onhow to Pressure Hoes. they fcked the wholeee Fire Dept
dope concept

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Gone @ your sig. Cool no show shine verse.