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There's too much difference between yellow and blue spots... It makes the whole text ugly. Like, you don't see it as one text, you see yellow and blue spots first.
And it seems off balance... Try to be more creative when placing letters if the text is your major focus.
If you made that font, that's good.
i agree if you made the font that great, and i really like it...but the colors, dont really blend, you really just see blue/yellow, so if the colors could blend the text would be great in my eyes...