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About to succumb to the stress of life to hard to handle ,leave works undone die make the chaos of life scramble/
a mercenary out to kill my self with the illusion im the enemy ,the corrupted side in-a-me is saying "a brick wall" keep cruising dont be afraid to lose it /
i almost blew it, crossed the line twice, getting two steps from the edge about to meet jesus christ/
this aint suicide its the answer i am riddled bowed down to drinkin cancer by the gallons ,without fear i may die ,leave my family with questions that can only be answered with why/
pressure disrupting services enough gas to bust your nervousness/
i wanna leave this place hide in the dark away from the pervertedness/
within me the world is a perfect storm/
im the odd facing the norm/ this is the way of life, forget it,
ill die in the swarm/
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awesome peice.... i can relate fully... the flow was good, the vocab was aweome and the emtions were nice and strong..... fave lines:
within me the world is a perfect storm/
im the odd facing the norm/ this is the way of life, forget it,
ill die in the swarm/
the ending was perfect and made a full tru mark that will stay on ne one when they read this peice.... keep it flowin!
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