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@MAC
@daveDILLY
yo
good luck man
gl bro
@mac
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Six years damn. Do u regret leaving a family behind yetQuote:
Originally Posted by miracle
ya son & wife cut ya off with letters like Brad Pitt in Seven years in tibet
Before u realize what this encounter is, Imma eat u alive and raw
Now that this chicken's cage free I can chop him within the boundaries of the law
If ya dropped the soap or not is some Schrödinger shit about you
Not only u threw ur life to the drain, I bet u got some plumbing work too
Plus when u realize I’m fuckin ur bitch, it’ll be a tough decision for u to face
cuz I pounded her last night. & that’s what got u arrested in first place
Make sure to bring ur guns killah if u wanna pick a fight
I’ll spin & spin circles around ya crib. Drafting someone to cap 2night
@daveDILLY
always getting murdered in battles - only thing u spit is phlegm..
all his concepts are dated and fucked, that’s why we keep ghosting them
da shit u create AINT great - ur not really a wiz..
all jokes aside ur shit aint half bad….100 percent is
a win for you is hard to see - like driving through fog..
& i thought you had COPD with how fast u choked against smog
writing was easy - but how many lines to go I had to figure..
decided i’d give Mac 10 in hopes he puts it in his mouth & pulls the trigger
it is best you don’t try - and I am going to keep this blunt..
after this you will be owing 5 like getting nick bags on front
Six years damn. Do u regret leaving a family behind yet
ya son & wife cut ya off with letters like Brad Pitt in Seven years in tibet
Nice opener.
Before u realize what this encounter is, Imma eat u alive and raw
Now that this chicken's cage free I can chop him within the boundaries of the law
Solid
If ya dropped the soap or not is some Schrödinger shit about you
Not only u threw ur life to the drain, I bet u got some plumbing work too
This would of been better if you didn't insinuate that he got banged, but instead outright said it, like, maybe getting rid of the "I bet", and then fixed the wording up a bit.
Plus when u realize I’m fuckin ur bitch, it’ll be a tough decision for u to face
cuz I pounded her last night. & that’s what got u arrested in first place
Another wording issue here.
Make sure to bring ur guns killah if u wanna pick a fight
I’ll spin & spin circles around ya crib. Drafting someone to cap 2night
This could of been dope, but there really wasn't a direct attack here. More swaggy than anything. I was feeling it from that perspective, but not for a punch in a battle.
always getting murdered in battles - only thing u spit is phlegm..
all his concepts are dated and fucked, that’s why we keep ghosting them
Good opener.
da shit u create AINT great - ur not really a wiz..
all jokes aside ur shit aint half bad….100 percent is
This was decent. Should of spent more time constructing it with a proper build and payoff. I'm not a fan of simple, to the point, kind of bars if there is a lack of supporting element.
a win for you is hard to see - like driving through fog..
& i thought you had COPD with how fast u choked against smog
Dope personal and misdirect.
writing was easy - but how many lines to go I had to figure..
decided i’d give Mac 10 in hopes he puts it in his mouth & pulls the trigger
Dope. But I have to say that this nameflip is probably redundant. I just haven't seen it personally because prior to the last few months I wasn't really around at the same time Mac was.
it is best you don’t try - and I am going to keep this blunt..
after this you will be owing 5 like getting nick bags on front
Wasn't feeling this. And the reason why is because of the simplicity of it. Again. Not enough time fleshing out the concept.
I have Dave winning 3-2. It was a competitive match up. Both had distinctive qualities about their verse I enjoyed and disliked.
v-DaveDILLY
years damn. Do u regret leaving a family behind yet
ya son & wife cut ya off with letters like Brad Pitt in Seven years in tibet
Before u realize what this encounter is, Imma eat u alive and raw
Now that this chicken's cage free I can chop him within the boundaries of the law
Vs
always getting murdered in battles - only thing u spit is phlegm..
all his concepts are dated and fucked, that’s why we keep ghosting them
da shit u create AINT great - ur not really a wiz..
all jokes aside ur shit aint half bad….100 percent is
a win for you is hard to see - like driving through fog..
& i thought you had COPD with how fast u choked against smog
Super tight battle , if mac would have cleaned up that pounded her last night bar I think I would have gave it to him , but have it going to Dave just for being a litttle more consistent
Good job fellas
Vote Dave
Absolutely not sorry broQuote:
Originally Posted by Mac
vs
always getting murdered in battles - only thing u spit is phlegm..
all his concepts are dated and fucked, that’s why we keep ghosting them
Pretty good
da shit u create AINT great - ur not really a wiz..
all jokes aside ur shit aint half bad….100 percent is
I get where u we’re going with this just not a fan
a win for you is hard to see - like driving through fog..
& i thought you had COPD with how fast u choked against smog
Lmao okay cool
writing was easy - but how many lines to go I had to figure..
decided i’d give Mac 10 in hopes he puts it in his mouth & pulls the trigger
Mac 10 played
it is best you don’t try - and I am going to keep this blunt..
after this you will be owing 5 like getting nick bags on front
I love drug rhymes this was basic but I liked it lol
Mac I thought your opener was good no hate. But rest I honestly hated lol. Dave did enough here. You’re getting better every battle. Just keep thinking of fresh concepts bro
v/ Dave
Six years damn. Do u regret leaving a family behind yet
ya son & wife cut ya off with letters like Brad Pitt in Seven years in tibet
decent
Before u realize what this encounter is, Imma eat u alive and raw
Now that this chicken's cage free I can chop him within the boundaries of the law
not a fan
If ya dropped the soap or not is some Schrödinger shit about you
Not only u threw ur life to the drain, I bet u got some plumbing work too
physics bar lmao schrodingers equation is "the cat is in the box and it is both dead and alive" theory then u flipped threw ur life to the drain idiom into plumbing work aka jail rape. It negates the schrodinger set up. coulda said he was both raped and not raped or some shit
Plus when u realize I’m fuckin ur bitch, it’ll be a tough decision for u to face
cuz I pounded her last night. & that’s what got u arrested in first place
decent
Make sure to bring ur guns killah if u wanna pick a fight
I’ll spin & spin circles around ya crib. Drafting someone to cap 2night
not a fan
vs
always getting murdered in battles - only thing u spit is phlegm..
all his concepts are dated and fucked, that’s why we keep ghosting them
didnt like this
da shit u create AINT great - ur not really a wiz..
all jokes aside ur shit aint half bad….100 percent is
cool
a win for you is hard to see - like driving through fog..
& i thought you had COPD with how fast u choked against smog
dope
writing was easy - but how many lines to go I had to figure..
decided i’d give Mac 10 in hopes he puts it in his mouth & pulls the trigger
i like this
it is best you don’t try - and I am going to keep this blunt..
after this you will be owing 5 like getting nick bags on front
not a fan
I enjoyed Daves's verse more overall + he had LOTB
my vote goes to: DAve
Max opener was good, pounded her was good also..other than that the rest was a miss not terrible misses but I just wasn’t feeling.. dilly had the opener which was cool.. copd was alright I thought reworded it could of packed more sting.. mack10 was iight
Imma give this to dilly for more quoteables VOTE DD
Vote davedilly
I liked Macs Brad pitt n cage concepts better than dillys
but rest hmmm eh l/setups need work. Plumbing coulda been better
Dave first 2 light. Copd was ur lotb
this was close, two opposing styles here
Dave Wins
Dave 2-1
Mac 0-5