10 lines due one hour after check in, this is my check upping link soon, gl fam
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10 lines due one hour after check in, this is my check upping link soon, gl fam
check, i'll get my links up tomorrow. fa sho you too battle on
this nerds got no game, if he ever got a butt, he got blasted quick……..
died up in flames, and reincarnated into a ash trey bitch/
if a girl checked out skillz, I’m sure he would be burning up in confidence/
if a girl made me cum, she’d tell me it was just a compliment/
ain’t no stopping this,… raw? This is real life dominance/
ill be doing tri1cks, while your life is sidelines …, like hopping bench/
but your girl is locking fans, I heard she used to be a mall cop man /
so if I see her chasing bums, I know there doing more than just hollering/
your almost dead,…..theres hope, belive and a mircle can save you fast/
but how can I take you legit? when even saints are known to kick your ass/
this hopeless b, I thought you were dope? all you got was blank looks..
only time dudes like what you write is when you quote rappers on facebook
i spit the stanza with a pickaxe to get this monkey off my back
i progress, while you stand in place still tryna grab a banana snack
Huf loves dick, but he scared of mine so he Hides Under Faggots
you less than earthworms eating dirt, just another low diseased maggot
you soak the bed every night, only sex you see is in a wet dream
you see your fantasies turn to 'reality' only after a tab of LSD
after this battle is done, this clown is gunna claim "huff shit"
you could be rapping against Justin Bieber and still not look tough, kid
diggin your drop bro, lets get votes
lol, nice drop
here are 2 links drop the next one tommrow
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...098/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...291/index.html
Slick - punches werent that fresh to me. didnt show anythin really solid but you did have the more direct approach nd came swingin more. and that closer was somethin else..
Huf - you came hella weak too. more than half ya verse didnt seem fittin for any type of battle. if i was you i'd try nd be more consistent on always aimin for solid punches. i cant forget about you not rhymin at times..or just really forcin it in.
hate to judge this off attempts and weak connectin lines, but Slick got this regardless.
Vote-> Slick
cant find any quotables in this battle.
pretty weak overall. you guys had some concepts but they werent executed the way that would have me feeling them. wording and stuff is a factor and you both just didnt come with some hits. lots of misses. ya'll tried though. i thought slick came slightly better tho. close battle.
v/slick
dam, thought i did better on atleast the punches, alright thanks for the constructive critism, upping
this nerds got no game, if he ever got a butt, he got blasted quick……..
died up in flames, and reincarnated into a ash trey bitch/
-no
if a girl checked out skillz, I’m sure he would be burning up in confidence/
if a girl made me cum, she’d tell me it was just a compliment/
-nope, even the self hype was wack
ain’t no stopping this,… raw? This is real life dominance/
ill be doing tri1cks, while your life is sidelines …, like hopping bench/
-eh
but your girl is locking fans, I heard she used to be a mall cop man /
so if I see her chasing bums, I know there doing more than just hollering/
-doesnt even rhyme
your almost dead,…..theres hope, belive and a mircle can save you fast/
but how can I take you legit? when even saints are known to kick your ass/
-eh
Vs
this hopeless b, I thought you were dope? all you got was blank looks..
only time dudes like what you write is when you quote rappers on facebook
-eh
i spit the stanza with a pickaxe to get this monkey off my back
i progress, while you stand in place still tryna grab a banana snack
-nah
Huf loves dick, but he scared of mine so he Hides Under Faggots
you less than earthworms eating dirt, just another low diseased maggot
-eh
you soak the bed every night, only sex you see is in a wet dream
you see your fantasies turn to 'reality' only after a tab of LSD
-ok
after this battle is done, this clown is gunna claim "huff shit"
you could be rapping against Justin Bieber and still not look tough, kid
-bad finish
Vote: Slick. He had better attempts & misses
this nerds got no game, if he ever got a butt, he got blasted quick……..
died up in flames, and reincarnated into a ash trey bitch/
vs
you soak the bed every night, only sex you see is in a wet dream
you see your fantasies turn to 'reality' only after a tab of LSD
v/slick. i thought he had better attempts at punchs n his verse was more consistent
red name DQd on links