10 lines
u first
30/check
no d/r
h/v
c/v
g/l
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10 lines
u first
30/check
no d/r
h/v
c/v
g/l
checkin in
good luck both of yah................................
im sicker than the average........sweet lil bastard........u keep talkin gon end up in a casket/
take one mo step n you'll find out........u was yappin yo mouth so u got the fuckin 9 clown......../
i'll take any nigga that comes to the plate........even the rralest niggas get proved like they fake....../
back on topic yo moms was a hoe........til i scraped her off...........cause u was yappin yo......../
this nigga calls his self muthafuckin streets.........and yall no he cant spit.........even on the comp u see......../
im real lil nigga and u fake........i say my 9's sweet u yap.....u get a taste........../
go call back up like u is 1 time..........im warnin u nigga.....and i'll only do it 1 time......../
i got this battle wraped up like toilet tissue..........i will pop one round....and i will not miss you...../
u is a gay nigga u been to da pen.........cus all this faggot talk.....actin like u got ran up in....../
man u couldn't walk a mile in my reeboks...........ill rip this lil faggot i dont need no beat box......../
that was a booty drop dawg..............
^^^^fuck u nigga..........uppin fo this nigga to drop
this dude didnt even go by his own rulle.......i need this dq'ed
soz bout that the site wouldnt let me on
mayne mumma jokes and gun talk..this nigga be illin dude
even if r/b was your after shave we wouldnt be feelin you
i'd like to say all jokes a side but nigga you wouldnt excist
your wack as fuck son, a burden who thinks he's a lyricst
meh!! you aint no obstacle to over come even if your 6'2 kid
"i aint never scared" dont mean u hard just shows ur stupid
dont plague us with ur wackness cus your mum disowned u
thinks he's dope dude but his wackness is startin to show through
your verse is livin proof shit happens..true verbal excrement
hard to tell if its a battle verse or your out comin statement
if you dont get my verse dont vote
*last line means comin out as gay
*excrement another word for shit
a this shiit was a waste of time but if i had to vote streetz cuz all the other did was talk about guns and fuck streets
streets takes it easy 6'2 used to many computer threats and wak shit that aint needed in a battle.streets easy real one sided
v/streets
thankz for the votes but uppin for more
streets takes it easy 6'2 used to many computer threats and wak shit that aint needed in a battle.streets easy real one sided
v/streets
6'2- Hated your layout poor structure. Get rid them bars.. Obviousley your verse didnt come hard at all. your punches were weak you had no personals an the flow was poor
streetz- Good layout meaning strucutre. It couldnt have been better. When it came to punches you had it on lock facing him. You had some ok personals. Try an use alot of multis an metaphor to literally beat someone.
break down
flow:streets
perosonals: streets
punches: streets
strucutre: streets
no hate
v/ streets
streets won this one...........
YET again i give it to streets 6'2 only talked his nine, but who gives a fuck when his lines dont even rhyme, its not difficult. I got bored didnt even finish yours. Streets took it by far
V/ Streets
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&page=2&pp=15